“He
just won’t listen.” Cassie says to the three people sitting around the table
with her, her fingers wrapped around a chai latte. “He walks away when I want
him to fight, he speaks like a pacifist when I want him to get angry. I try to
make him angry and he just gets sad! I don’t know what to do with him anymore!”
“I
understand completely!” A small blonde woman on her right says, taking a sip of
her tea with a grimace, “My Taisly says one thing, does another and is
different from home to school! I don’t know whether she is two people in one or
if I’m just incompetent!”
“You
aren’t incompetent!” The man across from Cassie says, “Darla, your Taisly has
just got to be split into two people. Maybe she has a younger sibling?”
“That
could work.” Darla says, her eyes going glazed and looking across and over the
shoulder of the man on Cassie’s left.
“Whatever
you do.” Cassie says, “Just don’t make it cliché.” They all shudder, and Roger
leans across the table to take Darla’s hand.
“Write
through it. It’ll come out. Same for you Cass. Get through the first draft.
They’ll fall into place eventually. Maybe your M.C. doesn’t like being the
war-causing rabble-rouser you need him to be, but that can give him depth can’t
it?” Tom nods at Roger’s words.
“Yes.”
He says, “Focus on the positive. You are at the halfway point. Don’t give up
now!”
Cassie
sips at her chai, and looks around the circle. “Well, that covers characters,
how are your plot outlines going?” Everyone groans and Roger stands up.
“I’m
going to need another latte for this conversation!”
This is great! Miss you, Kathryn! I remember when you wrote a long story called "But I Am a Lonely Chicken Farmer" :-) I remember it well! You were always writing and I was always reading. It worked out, well! Ah, the days of dancing to Zoe Girl, eating Nerds and climbing trees. Twas simple, wasn't it? Hope you're doing well!
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